Well, even more tags this time...

Man, I really love the whole Battleship-Simbiotic Hime & Yukikaze dynamic. It's like she can't help but want to be her big sis, super cute.

This and the previous page were cleaned and color-balanced by Nnescio.

DarkStar84 said:

Well, even more tags this time...

Man, I really love the whole Battleship-Simbiotic Hime & Yukikaze dynamic. It's like she can't help but want to be her big sis, super cute.

This and the previous page were cleaned and color-balanced by Nnescio.

You're doing a great thing both of you

Naka's being the buttmonkey, as usual.

DarkStar84 said:

Well, even more tags this time...

Man, I really love the whole Battleship-Simbiotic Hime & Yukikaze dynamic. It's like she can't help but want to be her big sis, super cute.

This and the previous page were cleaned and color-balanced by Nnescio.

Regarding the uncleaned pages, you could just upload the cleaned versions then make the new one as parent while the old one is a child post, then delete the old version page from the pool and then add in the new cleaned version.

Shinhwalee said:

Regarding the uncleaned pages, you could just upload the cleaned versions then make the new one as parent while the old one is a child post, then delete the old version page from the pool and then add in the new cleaned version.

Thanks, now that I've gotten a better handle on the workings of this site, I've begun working on that... pg 02 and 04 are replaced, as of now.

Oh, and while I'm posting... There's four remaining in the doujin (counting the closing notes and the back cover). Plus, I've already scanned the entire third doujin, which look considerably better just by following Nnescio's advice. When he's ready (and willing), I'll send the scans to him to be cleaned up.

Pages 4, 13, and this one still need translating. In the mean time, I should have the last two pages of Chapter 2 up tomorrow.

TL check, final panel, first narrator box (at the top right).

NNescio said:

TL check, final panel, first narrator box (at the top right).

You're amazing, thanks for all the hard work you put translating the remaining pages.

Though, I have to say that the narration is rather disconcerting, especially since overtly ominous happens in the next chapter (as far as I can tell, at least).

I'll post the last two pages, and you send you the scans of the second volume tomorrow.

NNescio said:

Naka's being the buttmonkey, as usual.

Hey, at least she's not dead like the last one implied.

Fast Battleship Hiei being a fast battleship... and so is ta-chan