Somewhat confused translation-newbie here. I first translated the last sentence in Alice's last bubble into "Because she won't look at me and me alone", and while I admit this sounded choppy, I'm a bit confused as to why "she can't" made it into the new translation. Since it's 見てくれない、shouldn't it be "she won't look at me" rather than "she can't look at me"? I'm just curious.
whatdoyouwant said: I'm a bit confused as to why "she can't" made it into the new translation. Since it's 見てくれない、shouldn't it be "she won't look at me" rather than "she can't look at me"? I'm just curious.
The "can't" shouldn't be there. Though I would leave out the "even" too, since there's nothing there to suggest it in the Japanese text. I've fixed it.
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