The artist also posted this comic in English, though by their own admission their English isn't very good, so I figured it'd be better to upload the Chinese text version in case anyone wants to do a clearer translation.
If anyone wants to check the artist's English version, it's on twitter here

HeeroWingZero said:

The artist also posted this comic in English, though by their own admission their English isn't very good, so I figured it'd be better to upload the Chinese text version in case anyone wants to do a clearer translation.
If anyone wants to check the artist's English version, it's on twitter here

I can't guarantee clearer, but I gave it my best shot. I'm open for criticism, so tell me what you think!

GuiedGui said:

I can't guarantee clearer, but I gave it my best shot. I'm open for criticism, so tell me what you think!

GuidedGui, You did a pretty good job on the English translation but I made some major overhaul so I hope you don't mind... I've also added Japanese translation below the English ones.

I wonder if Morishima Hitoshi comes here at all? I have a few recommendations on the original Chinese lines but I don't use twitter. Oh well.